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Tegan Bennett Daylight, Six bedrooms (Review)

April 9, 2016

Tegan Bennett Daylight, Six bedroomsI have just read Tegan Bennett Daylight’s collection of short stories, Six bedrooms, in my quest to read at least some of the Stella Prize shortlist before the announcement of the winner on the 19th of this month. I haven’t read Daylight before – she has written three novels, among other things – so I was glad for the added incentive to read her now. It helped, of course, that Brother Gums and family gave me the book for my birthday!

So, Six bedrooms. It’s a collection of 10 short stories, seven of which have been published previously in literary journals and anthologies. Eight are written in first person, and the other two in third. While the stories are all complete within themselves, as you’d expect, one character, Tasha, appears in four of them, the first, fourth, seventh and tenth. Evenly spaced out in other words, providing a nice sense of continuity and a sort of narrative framework for the whole. That, briefly, is the form of the book, but let’s get now to the content.

Most of the stories could be described as coming-of-age stories, as most of the protagonists are in their teens or early twenties. If you define coming-of-age broadly – that is, as a time of growth, transition and establishing identity – almost all the stories could be described as that. In the last story, “Together alone”, for example, Tasha is 36 years old, but while she’s certainly more “together” than her first appearance at 15 years old, she still has unresolved issues in her life, mainly to do with a missing brother and an ex-husband. This brings me to the epigraph. It’s by Tim Winton, and says “… the past is in us, not behind us. Things are never over.” A truism, you might say, but in this world where “closure” seems to be the thing, it’s worth remembering.

Although only the four Tasha stories are linked by character, there are several themes that recur in the book, besides the coming-of-age one. One is closely related to coming-of-age – the idea of the misfit. How many of us felt we were misfits, had that excruciating sense of feeling out of step with everyone else, only to discover later that those who looked so together felt the same! Tasha, in her first appearance in the book’s opening story “Like a virgin”, goes to a party with her friend Judy. She’s 15 years old, and feels ashamed because they showed everyone else how unable they were to deal with a party. Jane, the younger of two sisters in “Trouble”, feels lonely and awkward, a poor copy of her sister, and despises herself. And so on. Rose in “J’aime Rose”, though, has a different take. She calls herself a misfit, then soon after argues that she isn’t because she “didn’t have the courage”. For her a misfit is one who stands out through, say, “triple-pierced ears” or “a radical devotion to a singer or a style”. A rose by any other name I’d say! Anyhow, misfit or not, Rose, like many of the book’s protagonists, is lonely and unconfident, which leads her, like those other protagonists, to behave selfishly or even spitefully at times. The thing is that it’s all so believable! Unfortunately.

Other recurrent themes or motifs include missing people (parents, in particular, but also siblings, who disappear or die) which can exacerbate outsiderness, lack of sexual confidence, and friendships that survive or don’t under the weight of adolescent self-obsession and inexperience. Tasha and Judy remain friends through the jealousies and little lies to the last story when they are in the thirties, while Sarah and Fern in “Other animals” can’t survive a terrible difference in experience that Sarah doesn’t understand until way later. Daylight captures beautifully here the naive narrator who describes what she sees without having the maturity to understand the shadows beneath.

I enjoyed all the stories, but some stood out more than others. The Tasha stories for example. Daylight doesn’t broadcast the continuity, but provides hints – the name of the friend, the alcoholic but loving mother, the brother – that clue you in to the fact these stories are about the same person.

I also particularly enjoyed the title story, “Six bedrooms”, one of the non-previously-published stories in the book. The six bedrooms refer to a share-house. After all, you couldn’t really have a book about adolescents and young adults without one share-house story! The narrator here is 19-year-old Claire. Daylight builds the story with tight, effective narrative control. The residents of five bedrooms are introduced in the first couple of pages leaving us to wonder about the sixth. We learn about him four pages in. And Claire tells us that she has a friend in the house, with whom she’d moved from a previous house, but it’s clear the friendship is not strong. That too is left hanging, unexplained, until later in the story when we realise there are other perspectives besides Claire’s. Gradually, the relationships and their tensions are developed as Claire tries to find her own way and place. She befriends William, the resident of the sixth bedroom, but it never quite goes the way she’d like:

William sat on the one single chair. I smiled at him but it was as though the smile missed him, went over his head.

AND

I waited for him to touch me. I left my hand lying beside him so he could pick it up, but his hands were busy. He was itchy, and he needed to smoke …

AND

I invented a persona for myself: I was a girlfriend. Almost.

The problem is that she, like other narrators in the book, is naive, and there are things about William that she, in her naiveté, missed completely. Her pain of feeling stupid and alone is palpable.

Ultimately, Six bedrooms is about youth’s painful lessons. Its power lies in the way it captures the small (and not so small) excruciating moments in our lives when we know things aren’t right, but we don’t know how to right them. There are no dramatic resolutions or big light bulb moments, but there are glimmers of a forward momentum in many of the characters’ lives, such as Tasha realising in “Together alone” that “I might have been harder to live with than I thought”. Mostly, though, it’s about accepting that “awkwardness and trouble are part of being alive’’ (“Trouble”), that things are, indeed, never quite over. Another good Stella shortlist choice.

awwchallenge2016Tegan Bennett Daylight
Six bedrooms
North Sydney: Vintage Books, 2015
215pp.
ISBN: 9780857989130

11 Comments leave one →
  1. April 9, 2016 2:51 am

    Love the cover, it looks like the woman is escaping out the window. Maybe she is? The Winton epigraph is great and so true. I like your idea about coming-of-age stories, it plays well with the Winton quote and the stories you talk about. It’s a false thing to say that when you are 18 or 21 that you are all grown up and are supposed to have things figured out. Ha! Maybe like everyone feeling like a misfit when young, that’s the secret of being an adult, no one actually has it all figured out though some of us are better at pretending we do than others. Anyway, sounds like a great collection!

    • April 9, 2016 9:06 am

      Haha Stefanie, I think she is. I’m sure it’s referencing the idea of teenage girls sneaking out at night, so I think she is! I’m glad you agree with my idea of coming-of-age. We can feel like misfits at all stages of our lives. But as you say we can get better at submerging the feeling which is probably more what growing up is than resolving everything, as I had once thought being an adult meant!

  2. April 9, 2016 11:32 am

    I think most of uc could relate to some of the stories in Six Bedrooms. I preferred some stories over others. I like short stories, and I do appreciate that they somet times keep you guessing. The Stella list is a very good one, and it wouldn’t surprise me if Six Bedrooms won.

    • April 9, 2016 1:37 pm

      Yes, i liked some more than others too, Meg. I wonder if they’re the same ones? It will be interesting to see which one wins that’s for sure.

      • ian darling permalink
        April 9, 2016 6:49 pm

        It sounds an interesting book and it is good to see a collection of short stories on the list. The problem with collections of short stories are that they are a bit like old vinyl LPs – there is always going to be some filler. I love short stories but I can understand why people shy away from them. Six Bedrooms linkedness will help and it would be nice if it could win.

        • April 9, 2016 11:46 pm

          There are two short story collections in the list of 6, Ian, which is even better! My next review should be the other collection.

  3. April 10, 2016 8:07 pm

    Now that I have finished the Harrower short stories as well, I think I preferred Bennett’s. Their emotional impact was stronger for me as I really identified with the misfits and their desire to belong.

    The linking Tasha stories also made the collection cohesive in a way that Harrower’s weren’t. It made for a more satisfying read.

    • April 10, 2016 9:58 pm

      AH interesting Brona. I’ll be reviewing Harrower in a couple of days. Just have one story to go. I liked Daylight and agree about being easier to identify with, but Harrower, she just bowls me over!

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