Alice Ruth Moore, A carnival jangle (#Review)

Over the last two years I worked my way through the anthology Great short stories by contemporary Native American writers that was sent to me by my American friend Carolyn. It introduced me to many writers I hadn’t read before, and, valuably, to the issues and concerns facing some of America’s first peoples. Many of these issues – such as identity, and the long-lasting, all-encompassing fallout from dispossession – overlap with the issues First Nations Australians are confronting. It was an excellent reading project, so I was thrilled when, a year ago, Carolyn sent me another Dover anthology, Great short stories by African-American writers. I’ve read a few more of these authors than I had of the Native American collection, but not many, so I’m looking forward to another worthwhile reading project. Thanks again, Carolyn!

Alice Ruth Moore

The first thing to say about Alice Ruth Moore is that she is better known as Alice Dunbar Nelson, which is the name Wikipedia uses. Born Alice Ruth Moore in New Orleans in 1895, she married three times – Paul Laurence Dunbar (1898–1906), Henry Arthur Callis (1910–1916), and Robert J. Nelson (1916–1935). Poet Dunbar died in 1906, but it had been an abusive relationship and she’d left him before his death. Her marriage to physician and professor, Callis, ended in divorce, and she did not it seems take – or keep – his name. Her final marriage was to poet and civil rights activist, Nelson, and this marriage lasted for the rest of their lives. His name she used, but she also retained Dunbar. Fascinating.

A poet, journalist and political activist, Dunbar Nelson, who had a black mother and white father, was among the first generation born free in the South after the Civil War. She was also one of the prominent African Americans involved in the Harlem Renaissance (about which I wrote in my post on Nella Larsen’s Passing.) She lived in New Orleans for 21 years, and briefly taught primary school there, before moving to Boston and then New York, where she co-founded and taught at White Rose Mission, a school for coloured working girls (in the non-euphemistic meaning of the term!) She also lived in Washington D.C., Delaware and Pennsylvania.

Racism was an important issue for her, but she also took a wider view of human rights. She was an activist, for example, for African American’s rights and women’s rights. By the 1920s, she was concerned about social justice and the struggles of minorities in general. Wikipedia’s article concludes with this:

Much of Dunbar-Nelson’s writing was rejected because she wrote about the color line, oppression, and themes of racism. Few mainstream publications would publish her writing because they did not believe it was marketable. She was able to publish her writing, however, when the themes of racism and oppression were more subtle.

“A carnival jangle”

“A carnival jangle” appeared in her first collection of stories and poems, Violets and other tales, which was published by The Monthly Review in 1895, while she was still in New Orleans. She wrote a brief, self-deprecating introduction to the collection, commenting on the number of books being foisted on the market, and then offering her “maiden effort, — a little thing with absolutely nothing to commend it, that seeks to do nothing more than amuse”. Many of “the sketches and verses” had appeared in before, but many others were new.

There is also a preface by Sylvanie F. Williams (d. 1921) whom Wikipedia describes as New Orleans-based “educator and clubwoman“. (Click on the link to find out more about the women’s club movement in the USA.) She says the author ‘belongs to that type of “brave new woman who scorns to sigh”, but feels that she has something to say, and says it to the best of her ability”. However, she is also young, “just on the threshold of life, and with the daring audacity of youth makes assertions and gives decisions which she may reverse as time mellows her opinions, and the realities of life force aside the theories of youth”. Love this.

Williams also writes that “there is much in this book that is good; much that is crude; some that is poor”. I haven’t read any Moore/Dunbar Nelson, so I have no way of knowing where “A carnival jangle” sits in terms of her oeuvre, but it certainly feels like a standout in this collection.

Set during New Orleans’ Mardi Gras festival, “A carnival jangle” is fundamentally a mistaken identity story. It is just 4 pages, but delving into it – as the podcasters at CodeX Cantina did – reveals an impressively complex story offering multiple readings. I don’t usually go looking for analyses before I write my posts, but I came across CodeX Cantina when I was researching who Moore/Dunbar Nelson was. I’m glad I did because they teased out some culturally specific aspects that I didn’t know. For example, I completely misread the use of “Indians” in the story. These are the New Orleans or Mardi Gras Indians – an African-American carnival subculture, not Native Americans.

The story opens:

There is a merry jangle of bells in the air, an all-pervading sense of jester’s noise, and the flaunting vividness of royal colors; the streets swarm with humanity, — humanity in all shapes, manners, forms, — laughing, pushing, jostling, crowding, a mass of men and women and children, as varied and as assorted in their several individual peculiarities as ever a crowd that gathered in one locality since the days of Babel.

It’s tight and short, and tells of a young girl named Flo, who, hovering “between childhood and maturity”, is drawn away from her “unmasked crowd” by a “tall Prince of Darkness”, “a shapely Mephisto”, who promises to “show [her] what life is”. She is swept away to a costume shop and disguised as a “boy troubadour”, before joining the masked dancers – but things don’t turn out the way she is promised.

The two podcasters discussed “the tower of Babel”, which is alluded to in the opening paragraph and which suggests the idea of people coming together, until all falls apart, and the Faustian bargain, which is implied through the narrative and which presages a promise not fulfilled. The masked society can be understood as one in which all are equal, regardless of race or gender. However, masked people can also be invisible, unknown, and this tension between freedom and danger underpins this story.

The language is vibrant and lush capturing the excitement of the carnival, but is also constantly subverted by references and allusions to darker things. Carnivals, after all, tend to encompass opposing ideas – fun versus pandemonium, humour versus derision. The revellers here include “jesters and maskers, Jim Crows and clowns, ballet girls and Mephistos, Indians and monkeys…”, an odd and unsettling assortment which reflects not only traditional carnival characters but the diversity of New Orleans, and the racial tensions developing as Jim Crow laws were being enacted. Moore’s New Orleans is a place in flux, and the carnival motif is a perfect vehicle for conveying that.

The CodeX Cantina podcasters don’t talk much about Flo, and the fact that we don’t know what she wants or thinks. Described as “the quietest and most bashful of the lot” when she is drawn away, she seems to have no choice or agency in what happens to her. Is this because she’s simply a tool in the wider story, or is there a comment on gender, or both? What does it mean that she’s white?

“A carnival jangle” is a sophisticated story about a complex place and time, written by someone who was just starting her writing journey. It warrants more teasing out than I’ve done here, because it has so many angles to think about. Do read it, and, if you have time, listen to the CodeX guys. They don’t have all the answers but they do some good thinking.

Alice Ruth Moore
“A carnival jangle” (1893)
in Christine Rudisel and Bob Blaisdell (ed.), Great short stories by African-American writers
Garden City: Dover Publications, 2015
pp. 1-4
ISBN: 9780486471396
Available online at louisiana-anthology.org

21 thoughts on “Alice Ruth Moore, A carnival jangle (#Review)

  1. What a good choice of short story with Mardi Gras coming up soon. I also misunderstood the usage of “Indians” and had no idea that Jim Crows were minstrel black face characters. There’s a lot to unpack in that story!

    • I’m glad I’m not the only one, Carolyn, who didn’t know these things. A rich story, that I don’t think I’ve done justice to. (I’m going to amend it a little, in fact, but not much, in the part where I provide a brief summary.)

  2. “She was able to publish her writing, however, when the themes of racism and oppression were more subtle”

    “that type of “brave new woman who scorns to sigh””

    Two quotes the meanings of which baffle me …

    • I don’t think this is my finest review hour, MR. I went to bed thinking about how to fix it, so I might tweak it a bit. But these weren’t part of it!

      The first one means, I think, that she was only able to publish her writing when it wasn’t assertive/aggressive/in-your-face about those themes.

      The other I was less sure about – is there some cultural thing I don’t know – but I read it meaning that she wasn’t one of those probably older women who would sigh, perhaps in the background, about the things they didn’t like, the things they saw were wrong, but not do or say anything about them, not be confronting about them.

      • I will agree with your opening statement to the point of saying that I believe this one the first of your reviews containing incomprehensible (to me) bits.

        And I thank you for the explanations, ST – both of which I find entirely satisfactory. [grin]

        • Glad I helped there MR …

          I’ve added the story’s opening paragraph to the post, and expanded the summary of the actual story a little, which might help make my post more coherent.

  3. Hi Sue, A fascinating story, and what an interesting woman. And a reflection on New Orleans. 
    Thanks for sharing the collection from Carolyn! Kate

  4. I enjoyed your post and I enjoyed the story (which does contain a couple of references to ‘red-skin’ Indians). The writing to me seemed quite old fashioned and reminiscent of Edgar Allan Poe, both in style and content.

    • Thanks Bill … I see only one reference and it’s to “mimic Red-men” which suggests the New Orleans Indians to me? The whole story conveys a sense of mixed or undefined identities which in the best of all possible worlds would be good – as the opening sense of all humanity mingling suggests. But in fact, the masking, the idea of mimicry, etc, counteracts this ideal? I find it hard to put into words.

      Your point about sounding old fashioned makes sense … it is of its age with a somewhat breathless style, though we could argue that that suits the carnival theme?

        • Yes, I noted that too … am not completely sure about it, but she talks about imagining the houses gone and replaced by a “forest, where the natives were holding a sacred riot”. Apparently, Native Americans helped hide escaped slaves, so is it a nod to that? Another reference to a mixing of peoples and cultures? But “sacred riot” is an interesting description, and depends a bit on what she means by “riot”.

  5. Oooh, that’s Zora Neale Hurston on the cover of your book! I believe they just published yet another posthumous Hurston book recently. I don’t know of this author, but I have to imagine she kept the name Dunbar either because she started to be known with that name before she married her second or third husband, or, if we’re talking capital L literary, the name Dunbar has a ton of clout. He’s one of the best American poets ever.

  6. Her name is so familiar, I must have read single stories in anthologies like this one (but it doesn’t seem familiar, although it’s very short too). She certainly published a lot. I’m excited to see what’s next in your collection!

    • Great Marcie … I’m glad … but don’t hold your breath. The next one is much longer than average so I’ll have to schedule fitting it in!

      I felt the same re Alice Ruth Moore. I didn’t recognise that name but when I saw Alice Dunbar Nelson it rang a bell.

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